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I think for me to comment more on this piece you have to continue it because though the introduction is good it isn't very powerful. The character of Maude does ...

Terrific. There is no other word for it. The narrator has a character that I can relate to. there is a sense of humour in the story whhich is simply ...

This is a good piece of work and it is very touching. however there are some pats that need to be checked on. When you said I'd be all right, ...

This piece is quite inspirational. What struck me most about the story was the character of Melanija, especially at the end of the story where she is shown to be ...

I must admit that this is a beautiful piece of work. Short but worth a read. the punctuation is quite good and they give your poem good flow. I love ...

I love the way you have described 'mommy' in this poem because her role comes out quite vividly in this poem. However, one possible error that i noticed was in ...